Wednesday, June 8, 2011

Cav's Guide - How To Write An Essay


Steps To Go Through - 

1) Read à React
2) Hypothesis à Unpack the question/ prompt + react
3) Research (Examples in a book or text)
4) Stream of consciousness (Free flow writing) à Re read writing 

(If all fails go back to No. 2)

5) Drafting à Organise thoughts/ ideas (Structure)
6) Editing/ Revision

Structuring An Essay:

Intro:

 W.I.F.M.à What's In It For Me

1) Grab Attention: So What?
- Relevant
1-2 Sentences

2) General discussion of topic
1-3 Sentences (Highlight the important aspects of book and focus upon)

Scifi Book à (Characters, technology)

3) THESIS
1 Sentence

Body: Information

Paragraphs


1) Topic sentence
- Mini Thesis

2) Examples from text (3-6 sentences)
- Introduce quote and give relevance to topic sentence
- Quotes
- Explain quote à Why is it important and link back to topic sentence/thesis

3) Transition
- Connects one paragraph to another

Conclusion: 
- Sum up
- Relate back to thesis
- Restate

W.I.F.M à Relevance....So What?

Tuesday, June 7, 2011

Enders Game Assessment Notes




Question: In the science fiction world of Ender’s Game progress is propelled by fear.

1)    Science Fiction is a Genre  (Technique/Convention and THEMES)
   
-         Space Travel
-         Future
-         Apocalypse
-         Aliens (Buggers)
-         Technology 
      
2)    Fear:
                                                                                      
-         Fear of war àImproved knowledge
-         Fear of becoming Peter (Mean, killing & cruel) à Character develops (Stranger)
-         Fear of death
-         Fear of losing someone
-         Fear of xenophobia (Fear of foreigners) à Alliances made               
-         Fear of conflict (Irony) àConvincing victory                                                 
-         Fear of disappointment (Failure) – Ender is challenged, character develops (Stranger)
-          Fear of buggers à Improved knowledge, Ender is challenged
  
3)    Propel:
-         Monitors
-         Battle School
-         Develop ansible (Instant Messaging) à Improved technology
-         100 Years war
-         The nets (Locke and Demosthenes)

4)    Progress
   
      - Convincing victory (Bullies)
      - Ender is challenged (Military skills develop)
      - Alliances made
      - Improved technology
      - Improved knowledge